first song yay!

I (somewhat) finished my song. so you guys can hear wut im doin.

http://media.putfile.com/Unconquerable-Demo

btw this is the first time i ever used sheet music, so thats why its not too good. its just a quick recording i did

*watches tumbleweed go by*

*joins tumbleweed in going by*

*Makes another tumbleweed to go by*

[ I distribute them for teh living ] lol.

*sighs* u guys are hopeless

if anyone is interested at all in my music (doesnt seem like it)

http://www.purevolume.com/bodombeachterror

We're interested in good music, man.

j/k.

Rather..composed writting there on 'Unconquerable Demo'

Eh your tone is kinda messed up, but as you learn you will find out how to resolve that. Mad props on reading the sheet music man.

BTW heres something that will keep the tumbleweeds away:

http://www.myspace.com/justnothingness

Just listen to the steve vai cover.

Yeah man, you're getting better. And if you played this while reading notation, then congrats. I'm glad you're working on it, too.

I also agree, your tone isn't quite right, but in time you will find which one you truly like.

the guitars tone?

Yes, they mean that. Low string was kinda cool in background. I noticed you dindt have a bass and there was many high sounds that they screaming in ears... You recorded them and they all came from center and that cause they mess eachothers that way.

Your drums left in background that I had to consentrate the hear them at the times, so raise volume on that one.

Ive noticed some cool chord changes there. Be consentrated on timing. Well, all than that it is an start. Save it. After couple years of training, recording, playing its fun to listen your new and old stuff and compare them.

But anyway, Congratulations of your first song :). Have fun and keep up the training.

okay, yea it doesnt really sound right.

that low part was a cello, and those screaming ones where violins, very bad sounding ones

Nah, I can tell the difference between the instruments, it's your guitar's tone. Record yourself, see what you like and don't like about it.

@ BBT,
I listened to the song a couple of times, once last night and once this morning and i kept saying to myself, "where's the guitar?". All I could here were the violins! Generally I agree with the other posts about the low output on drums. Would be nice to hear some lyrics or a strong lead with that to add some melody to it. Keep working on the song and see if you can clean it up.
Phip

Cello! no surprise that I liked it xD. Just for fun, try to replace those violins with Bassy rhytm guitar.

Did you used audacity or how you recorded/composed it?

Sorry, should mentionmy speakers aren't currently working (again) so I'll just say I'll listen when they are.

@Jazzy. i actually kinda like the tine, other than i accidently left it on the neck pickup (i think, which one is the thinner sounding one?)

@phip. yea i turned the drums down, because A) i wanted it to be more orchestral i guess. and B) the drums sound like poopoo

@emp. lol. i wrote it with a midi program, then opened it with audacity

I can't listen to it. I don't have Quickplayer. Sorry man. I like whats on your Myspace though.