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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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An original I recorded the other night. Give it a listen if you have time I guess.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROJhG30dSAs
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EMB5490 |
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Joined: 10 Feb 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Licks: 1 Karma: 31
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Acctually, AUBURN won.
You odviously like zakk wyldes early acoustic stuff eh? |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Huh?
My hair is auburn. I win, regardless. xD
And yeah, but this song is an original. |
nullnaught |
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Joined: 05 Jun 2010 Karma: 22
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very nice. Does it cost anything to make a youtube video? |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Nothing but time dude. Just get a camera, record it up, and upload it to YT. You have to have an account though. |
BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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You got an excellent southern rock voice man, it's surprising for such a young dude to have such a big voice. But work on your diction/pronunciation, I didn't really understand at least half of what you sang (maybe thats the thing to do with southern rock, i wouldn't know) But good job man, Its always exciting when starting out songwriting |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Thanks man! And yeah, I know. I need to re-record that song, I was nervous with it and kind of slurred a lot. |
nullnaught |
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Joined: 05 Jun 2010 Karma: 22
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@Ozzfan486 Thanks. I do have an account |
BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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lookin forward to some uploads nullnaught! |
nullnaught |
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I have no camera yet. |
AlexB |
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Joined: 13 Jul 2009 Mexico Licks: 2 Karma: 23
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Thats nice man,yes really Pride & Glory influenced,you should work on your tempo,you speed up a lot on some parts,and work on the singing,nice work man keep rocking! |
btimm |
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Joined: 14 Dec 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 16
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I am pretty impressed with this Ozz and really dig it. Like AlexB said, there were some spots that were alittle off time, but overall it was a really good tune. I admire the creativity and passion in your playing and singing. Honestly, I think there is legit potential as this song you wrote is better imo than 90% of the stuff out there on the radio. Keep working hard Ozz!
The only other thing I thought, and I think this is more of a preference than anything "wrong" so to speak, but I think the solo for this song could have been a little slower and built up to some shredding. Similar to what EMB said about Wylde, it makes me think of "In This River", where he took a beautiful song that had potential to be flat out amazing (and still is I suppose, kinda), and just put in a solo that made me cringe, because it failed to fit the song properly to my ears.
Take that with a grain of salt though Ozz, because like I said, this is just a preference thing. Your song was really good and I thoroughly enjoyed the Hell out of it. |
luthier |
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Joined: 23 Jul 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Karma: 10
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@Ozz
My computer won't let me listen to it but I'm sure it's good, congratulations... ;)
@EMB
Are you an auburn fan? |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Thanks guys! About the timing and solo, yeah, I know. Both were pretty sketchy. I'm gonna try to map it out better and re-record it sometime soon. Thanks a BUNCH for all the positive comments though, it means a lot.
Cheers! |
MoshZilla1016 |
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Joined: 10 Jul 2010 United States Lessons: 4 Licks: 19 Karma: 16
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Good job Ozz. Wish the vox were a little easier to catch but I thought it was pretty good. |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Thanks Mosh! :) |
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