a lyric

ok.. im writing this:

Verse 1:
devil said to man
hurt her all you can
and man, was about to fall
then saw the angels smile

Chorus:
Big fish
Youre movin on a train
youre goin out of town
and i dont know why
Big fish
I wanna be with you
I want you to be free
not a trophy on my house
...!..this channges to:.!-- the meat on my plate

Verse 2:
Wise guy gave advice to man
said, do the best you can
but if you get to be denied that life
remember, later youll thank the girl
But if youve got fever
or youre just waitin for the feast
he told man
youll drown on your own thirst



this is not a song for anyone, but for me, thnks to the songs i write, its easier for me to put in a "cage" a feeling, and then be able to control it better..
Meanin:
Youre movin on a train- it cant be stopped
youre goin out of town- and it wont be the same, cant go back
not a trophy on my house- i dont do this for a social status
the meat on my plate- i dont do this for materialistic reasons, like sex
But if youve got fever- fever=hot, i think you can get it easily
or youre just waitin for the feast- again, feast=sex


Comment please, i need to improve the lyrics and finish them suggestions welcome

Hidden meanings are always good Soy. You can express yourself, and let people make their own inferences when they hear it as well. A Recording?

I'm liking what I'm reading man! Keep it up. I too would like to hear a recording!

I'd have to hear this one.

nice nice nice

not sure i understand the "Big Fish" part, doesnt seem to fit. but its your song

im recordin a vid, still got to finish the lyrics and define some parts of the song..
big fish... the big fish in the pond. i hope its clearer.
well.... that chicks drivin me crazy.. she just told me shes movin back to michigan, yeah, shes from there. a shame, ill miss her. lots.. but itll make it easier 4 me 2 get over it... till now, its been three songs. its a record.. ill post the other lyrics later, and finish this one as soon as i feel like.
i might get better quality recordins, a friend is gettin a place where well be able to put our recordin gear all together.

theres another song i wrote. im proud of it.
g xxx787 ..... G 355433 ..... G2 xxx433 ..... Adim xxx545 .....
em xxx453.....Em 022000 ..... F#dim xxx212 ..... ?1 xxx445 .....
?2 xxx557 ..... ?3 xxx778 ..... C7 x35353 ..... B7 x24242

Verse 1:
g
For what is now and will be
Adim
For what was yesterday
em
Make me yours today
F#dim
Make me happy again
G2
I know im the last in line
?1
but to me you are divine
G2
i know im not the best
?2----------------------?1
but you girl stand high above the rest
?3 (wait till it vanishes)
for what i sing i also pray/live (not sure)
Same guitar, diferent lyrics
Ive got no day
Cause youre away
And lovin the night
its just not the way
I just cant say goodbye
when a girl like you is denied
Ill do my best three times
and then ill try again
All for you sweet girl

Verse 2:
G----------------C7----B7
Love, its such a nasty word
Em-----------------------F#dim-----B7
MAkes me fall, kicks me when im on the floor
G-----------------------C7--------B7
Love, its so unique, and yes, i can explain
Em-----------------------------F#dim----------B7
Looks can play decieveing, but thats not your game
G--------------------C7--B7
Love keeps me alive, so alive
Em-------------------------F#dim-------B7
Love gives us the strenght we need all time
G--------------------C7----B7
Love makes silence a death maze
Em-----------------------F#dim-B7
Love can make of silence a paradise

Ok. its:
Verse 1
Verse 2
Verse 1 (first half only)
Verse 2
Verse 1
This was completely written by me, please respect that

Dude! It looks like you are using you're current experience and advice you're getting from this site to make the lyrics of this song. The song speaks to your experience, emotions and resollution. Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!

Keep it up!

well... thanks for the compliment, just hope she likes it.

thats it
the final lyrics are on youtube

Why couldn't you just put the original on youtube? The sound quality is really bad. Really cool song though, I'd like to hear the actual recording to properly judge, and to be able to SEE you! :P

Wow, Soy your lyrics are real good! And I doon't like songs talking about wanting sexual intercourse but tI'm impressed by this. About the part play/live I prefer live a little more in that sentence but I like how pray connects into the line 'Ive got no day...' but I feel whatever word you choose will go well either way. It'll continue to maintain it's rythm with or without 'pray' if you like live in the line, I think.

Jazz, I'm not the one to confirm it but maybe Soy doesn't like being seen on YouTube? I couldn't blame him if so, you find some strange people in that place.

its not that, its only that i lost the cable for the camera to the computer and the computer has no sd ranure on it, i wouldve put the original if i had been able