new song idea

just a thought. i want to put a solo in the middle of that, but i'm still working on it.

middle of what? :S:S

I can't see it. Can you try it again?

Keep working on it, your timing needs some improvement, play along to a metronome and that should help you out. Go for the solo, I don't see anything wrong with that, just make sure you compliment the chords otherwise it could sound like a disaster.

some of those chords already sounded like a disaster to me. no offense

The guitar either isn't tuned right, or the microphone is a o_0


Some of those chords sound a little... eh. You need to work on your fingering and strumming patterns.

Yeah, I dont know, some chords sounded like they should imo, but if you stop on 0:45 you can see your fingerings, I think you tried G? am I right? if so you jumped one fret over. But anyway, there can be heard quite nice sounding progression that could be cool on some verse.

Well anyway, keep goin m8.

Cheers!

quite extravagant, and i like extravagant, but sounds a lil disharmonic on it