My playing

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=seeOx--8xpo&feature=player_embedded

tell me what you think...ik i screw up...



btw i dont use tabs or read music i did it by ear which is why it lacks exactness

Nice job dude! You play very well good sir ;) I didn't notice really any mistakes that I wasn't looking for except for maybe the open ringing G towards the end, but other than that(and it's not like everyone at the show would really care about that one little mistake) it sounded really good man :D

Nice job!

well I think your vibrato and bending is quite good. The licks seem quite relaxed. i don't know the song, I'm not into Pink Floyd at all. Was that mostly improvised or a cover?

Pretty good job dude! I paused my then-currently-playing music to check it out and didn't go right back to my tunes, so yeah, pretty good in my book. And as for doing it by ear, I like that. You're not completely ripping the person off, and for a solo like this, I think you did it just right.

Ozz

its the cover of the solo, i think its pretty close and i know it almost exact but i fudged up on some parts of it...

how do you like my tone?

first half was my eternity the 2nd (after the little break) was the pig mine i also had an eq running a chorus and a delay

thanks i didnt learn it to be my own version i just hate people telling me (tabs or sheet) how to play something and most of the time theyre wrong.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZlswXCFFOJQ



this was honestly not my best but still w/e i really was badly off time in this... i need to turn down the guitar volume (i cant hear the backing music)

Tone sounded pretty good. A little too much bite to it, but I think that was just because the volume was overpowering the camera.

yeh my camera was clipping... at first i was like WOH when i heard it because there was so much treble... especially on the second...

Not bad, Not bad at all. The tone was good, you just need to work with volumes better. and man, you weren't kidding when you said you liked hippies and what not

work with volumes? i think my problem is i need to turn it down :)

but yeah... thats not even the hippiest thing i wear... you should see me going to school with my tyedye shirt sandals shorts riding my bike... haha

that's what I meant by "work with volumes" either turn the track up, or turn your amp down. and when your working with the higher mids, it's gonna cut through everything if your recording.

and i can imagine you hippie outfits, an old friend of mine did the same thing, (I think he still does, but he's a stoner now anyways sooooo yea).

yeah i love boosting the mids it really cuts through the mix... unfortunatly it doesnt go too loud uk... and to get a tone im happy with i turn it up pretty loud... uk... so the track gets kind of lost.. i wana get an opinion on my improvising to a few dead tracks uk

sweeeet bends!

thanks :) i acctually overbend and ** on both tracks but honestly i have pretty good feel on vibrato and bends... a lot of people say hey whered u get your vibrato? its just a natural vibrato its a bit of a combination of allen collins randy rhoads and a tiny bit of zakk wylde if i want it...

pretty good