case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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alright dudes and dudettes(sorry, been watching fast times all day :D )
This is the latest song that I am STILL working on. I have the backing track pretty much set in stone the solo is probably going to be changed at some point(though it is improv).
I would like to know what you guys here would like to see added maybe to the song, I would like to experiment with different things to try :D
So hit me with them and I'll see what I can do ;)
oh and any criticism on the bare track posted is always appreciated :D
Thanks guys, I'm looking forward to any ideas you may have :D (within reason lol) |
Schecter_player |
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Joined: 12 Jul 2009 Canada Karma: 3
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My only comment right now is that, it seems like the sometimes the lead wasn't loud enough in the mix. Thats not really something that'll help you improve much though. hahah. |
case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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I noticed that too, I'm trying to balance it out so the final product is much more balanced and smooth |
hamad |
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Joined: 24 Oct 2008 Bahrain Karma
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u have to get some shrooms man |
AlexB |
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Joined: 13 Jul 2009 Mexico Licks: 2 Karma: 23
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i second the shrooms idea |
case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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hahaha...hahahahahaha... Thanks for the laughs guys ;) |
case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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Any other comments? suggestions? I really want to add to it, but I may want to have someone chime in with something I may never have thought of ;) This is let's say an experiment :D |
carlsnow |
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Joined: 29 Apr 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Karma: 23
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sounded rushed as hell bro ... take a deeeep breath ... relax.
hell , lol, you've posted more tunes inna week [wink] than i write(and KEEP) inna damn year LOL.
slow down and give one your complete obsessed attention and make it a BEAST!
RAWK!
Cs
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BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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i felt that some of the fast parts 0:44 and 2:28 i think? they sounded really bland to me. sounded just too up and down, try mixing things up a bit maybe? |
case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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hmmmmmm...
This is going to be something that I want to be a beast of a song :) I'm not finished with it just yet ;) thanks for the input guys
Back to the drawing board to make it AMAZING! hahaha
thanks again BBT and Carl and everyone else ;) |
Empirism |
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Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Finland Lessons: 4 Karma: 35
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Soz I missed this totally :P. Imo your best shot so far. There could be a little work with the phrasing, but other than that nice mellow stuff m8.
Empirism |
case211 |
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Joined: 26 Feb 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 6 Karma: 24
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thanks man :) I'm going to be focusing on a piece that is pretty mellow as well(I seem to be in that writing mood :P) that I hope will be much better than this.
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