Work in Progress

Here's a short video of a song I've been working on for a week or so. This was the first take.



This makes me a little bit self-conscious about all the faces I make while playing guitar. :P

Sound quality isn't so great, but lemme know what you think anyway. Next time I will make sure to turn off the fan running behind me, along with some vocals!

Here's what I've got so far:

"If I had just one wish
I wouldn't waste it on money
I'd ask for all the time in the world
and then I spend it with you honey

It feels like this hole you left in me
will take forever to fill
When you're young it still feels like
you've got all the time in the world to kill"


Thanks!

lol dont worry about the faces lol, when i started when id do a run, id kinda mouth it out lol.

i like the lyrics and the guitar. good job, those lyrics are deep.

very good, no complaints, no errors.. a very good song.. record it

Foogered,
Nice finger work. the melody is catchy. Really good job. I like the chords you are using up on the 5th fret. Finish it up and do it again without the fan running. (the old man had a bit of a problem hearing some of the notes) Haha
Phip

You don't need me to say this, but you've done an awesome job. Your fingers look comfortable enough to reach each chord, which shows you've actually practiced this, and it's paid off! Great work man. Awesome song too.

Just a side note, and this will probably be difficult to do, 'cause it is for me too, but try not to pull the face expression when you mess up, it lets us as viewers know where you messed up. Although it didn't happen often. You should see my face when I mess up. hahaha