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Joined: way back Mexico Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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http://www.myspace.com/alchilelabanda.. o know ive posted it lot of times before.. but i havent been to myspace in years literally... ignore my bad singin, id feel very good bout you not payin attention.. i hear this and i tell myself... u recorded these years ago, and you havent done anything new and recorded it in more than a year.. i feel im losing creativity.. anyway, please comment
hell thats when i knew no theory, n when, i believe my solos made sense |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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I'm currently on laptop dude. No speakers. I'll listen later. Btw, are you Jose C on Myspace? Somebody who had that name added my music page, but I'm not sure who it is. |
soy.el.che |
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Joined: way back Mexico Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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nope, im not |
JazzMaverick |
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Joined: 28 Aug 2008 United Kingdom Lessons: 24 Licks: 37 Karma: 47 Moderator
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"I'm OK" - It needs more work, good start, but I'm certain you'll understand when I mean that. The distortion is a bit weird, might want to work on that. It's also pretty much in your face, when you're trying to listen to your clean guitar.
"FTL" - (What does that mean?) Beginning reminded me of Hendrix. The distortion is too dirty, it doesn't justify your playing. Clean it up a bit and it won't be half bad.
"Things" - timing is slightly off, nice tone on the acoustic. I like your vocals, too. Again, timing is so important.
Keep working on them, until they sound tight and you're happy with them now. |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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FTL = For the Lose |
Empirism |
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Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Finland Lessons: 4 Karma: 35
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I liked "Things" very nice song and you are very good singer, I suggest you to focus on that song to make it perfect. First two in my opinion was recorded poorly so I think they are beyond fixing otherway than totally remake them...
I dont know how you record, but ive noticed that in every song your bass freqvencies on equalizator was over and others even noticeable. That you can make them sound better, fix that.
Cheers!
Empirism
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Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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I added you man. Sounds really good. Its nowhere near perfect, but thats what makes it pretty cool. I'd re-record it. It'd definetly be worth the trouble. |
soy.el.che |
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Joined: way back Mexico Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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yep, i dont have a bass, i play it on guitar and then lower it all i can..
the idea for FTL is a lyric full of mixtures of common phrasesthat refer to a sense like SWEET revenge or i SAW it coming , with the main theme of the song being about love seen in a distorted way FTL stands for felt the light... i dunno if its understandable, quite crazy it is |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Intricate, yet understandable. Cool. |
soy.el.che |
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Joined: way back Mexico Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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it goes like i have never felt the beat , i have never heard the sweet sound of victory, but ive seen something, something so.. ive ive heard the gazes, felt the voices seen their words fallin appart
but ive seen somethin, something so sweet |
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