what do you all think of this

i just want to hear your all commets and advice on this riff.i might be adding it into one of my songs. thank you

standard tuning:



lead guitar

e-------------------------------------

b-------------------------------------

g-------------------------------------

d----------------------5--------------

a-----5h7p5--5-5--5h6h7--7p6p5--------

e--5h8-----8-------------------5*-----



rhythm guitar (up an octave)

e-------------------------------------------------

b-------------------------------------------------

g-------------------------------12----------------

d------12h13p12--12-12--12h13h14--14p13p12--------

a-12h15--------15-------------------------12------

e-------------------------------------------------

i'd need to hear it in context...can ya record it and share?

Tab sucks man... learn to read music.

I tested it, it sounds allright with two guitars. Little Iron Maiden style eh? :P... but yeah, like Jazz said, tabs are bit bad to know how you meant it to be played. No key, no tempo or anything... (well, I suck with notation anyway...haha)

sorry here it all is......

key: A major

tempo: 185bpm

time signature: 4/4

thats it.

thats nice and all but we need the timing for the notes... ex. whole half quarter 8th 16th etc...

185 tempo?? thats a bit rediculous? insanly fast... you may be counting in 8th notes instead of quarter notes. its probably half of that so around 90 bpm... i mean i could be wrong... your song but thats a very fast tempo.

your right i sorry i have trouble with that stuff. messed up i did a about double.

haha np the best thing... would be a recording! get out that camera