patleh |
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Joined: 05 Dec 2008 United States  Licks: 1 Karma: 8
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Cmaj
talking to the mirror all alone
Gmin
trying to make what was said unknown
Gmaj
Emaj
Cmin
Driving home in the rain
Gmaj
trying to find out "what's he sayin?"
Gmin
tell me when to stay and when to go
E
s maybe i'll know--
Cmin
do you want me to stay
Gmin
or to leave
Gmaj
what do you want me to say
Emin
do you want me to plead?
idk i;m still working on it but its a start i guess.
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BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada  Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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pretty good dude |
Heather |
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Joined: 21 Aug 2008 United Kingdom  Licks: 2 Karma: 19
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Well I think it's a brilliant start. Really like the lyrics and your chords, they all seem to fit well to me. |
JustJeff |
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Joined: way back United States  Lessons: 2 Karma: 21
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I find if you resolve to the Cmin instead of the Emin, it sounds a little more pulled together.
Though if you are looking for that dissonant ending... the Emin works :-P |
patleh |
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Joined: 05 Dec 2008 United States  Licks: 1 Karma: 8
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ah, that does sound pretty good, i guess i'll just keep messing around with it. |
soy.el.che |
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Joined: way back Mexico  Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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like it |
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