On the tip

On the tip of my tounge, are the words i want to say
but i cant get'em ouuuut cause i wasnt raised that, way
Your always standing right there, saying the same thing
taking shots here and here, along with the army you, bring
never gonna stop, never gonna give up
never gonna drop, never gonna shut up
(Faster)Eventually it comes to punches, but i guess the biggest man wins
sometimes it comes in bunches, cause i guess it's not enough to sin
(slow again)
and then just again the same melodies over again, with different lyrics. still working on that chorus.

I liked it. I can almost hear the music.

I liked the fast part best.

One of the best yet imo

i'm thinking a sort of guns n roses style

I liked it. I definately did hear a Guns n Roses style when I first read it. It does feel that sort of rocky. You're lyrics are great, can't wait to see what else you come up with for it!