my first recorded song

hey guys and gals this song was recorded at 430 in morning and i was really tired well go to this site

http://myspace.com/vincejonesiiimusic

Next time, sleep well!! haha, just jokin. Cool shredding workouts there... only thing, that your record cutted over.

Its the worst thing that can happen when recording, volume can always rised up later, but if its too loud and cutted over, there are nothing that can do. So, be carefull with that volume knob :D.

Anyways, I really liked the shredding parts. Otherway I little lost the track on rhythm because there was no drums or anything. Keep on rockin m8, it was pretty good at first recording take anyway

Cheers
Empirism

thanks

You shouldn't make excuses, if you said that to a professional they'd throw you out. It needs work, most definitely your timing! Work to a metronome, like I say to everyone; COUNT the beats! The harmony clashes quite a lot.

In all serious honesty; you have a lot of work to do. You need to study more, but you can do it if you keep at it. So keep it up! :D

uhh thanks