Finally Some Lyrics

Theres Somthing going on that just doesnt seem right,
Im Just tryin 'n put it all together!

The People I See, The Dreams that i fight,
It doesnt seem to be gettn better!

I know that im not going crazy,
Because im already (the already is kinda mushed together)Insane!
People look at me and wonder...
What the hell's with his Brain!



its still coming but thats what i got so far

i need a bit of help with them, so everything is appreciate.

what genre are you trying to right for? I'll offer any help i can give but i'm not good at writing lyrics really

Well I take it it's ment to be a form of rock? That's definately what I'm imagineing in my head. Maybe you could include some further words to say how the singer is finding thing's complex? And how they're getting frustrated about it?

I'll return on this later as I'm a little busy finding and mixing tabs for my song but I'll be back here to think about what might suit your song later. For now just get yourself a little thought shower for any situations (if any) that could fit into the lyrics you already got. And if you ever hear words or lines you like the sound of that you hear anywhere race off to write them down somewhere to later create them into something.

Yea, i figured it was some sort of rock also but you have to think about how many forms of it there are

Yeah, it's the form I don't know. Last time I read this it a heavy metal feel, when I looked at it again now it seems to sound like punk. I'm not sure, but that's I good thing I suppose. That means embcan make it into whatever style he wants.

yeah, its rock/metal kinda thing, i really like classic rock early metal, everything now i hate, so if you say it sounds like somthing now, i just throw it away lol. im still working on it, i have some other lyrics not in a line, and i suck at melodies b/c i find i copy other songs melodies... but some other are, nothing seems right, nothing fits anymore, everything is going wrong. and my friend had an idea of a song ebing named fight or flight, but it just doesnt fit.

as for the heavy metal feel, i like ozzy, and van halen, and a bit of iron maiden but thaats it, mainly classic rock and stuff, however i am REALLY into ozzy right now.

I liked it a lot.

lol sweet.

I do like it, to me it has an Iron Maiden feel to it, some of you might say something else but that's just me

Just don't go biteing the heads off bats for no particular reason then emb! It's not cool. Whoops, no he has to bite a sandwich at a gig now doesn't he? :D Now THAT looks cool!

I don't usually like rock anymore these days, to be honest I thikn I started hateing it after I listened to Ozzy then heard about the terrible thing's he's done so I stopped listening to it altogther, then when I listened to other rock bands again I simply didn't like it anymore and I moved to country. But the old me would've loved your lyrics and she was a huge rock fan. So I bet it suits well.

lol, they made fun of ozzy for that on Family Guy

but just because people who are in rock do this stuff doesn't make their music bad or bad to listen to it just makes the person that does the stuff bad

well first he thought it was a fake bat, the story is that during concert someone threw a bat on stage, and in the hype of it all, ozzy thought it was a toy bat, so hed bite the head off of it and the crowd would go wild, well...it was real, nd the rabies shots hurt lol. what i hate is when i say i like ozzy osbourne, people immediatly think...ok a lunitic who is completely drugged out and bites heads off animals. While that is true about OZZY, he had some of the if not THE most genius musical minds with him. (im talking about form '79-march 19 of 1982. he had bob daisley who not only a freakin genius on bass, but a fantastic lyricist, nd Randy Rhoads, who in my opinion, is the greatest guitarist and guitar writer. ozzy just HAD an incredibly unique voice, now he sucks.

anyway, by my standards, anything made b4 i was born is good and anything after is crap. id say gnr was the last great band of real music. if i had to listen to one genre now... as in music being made now, it be tough but prob country (not mainsteam of course), blues( is it still being made lol), and some rhcp are ok.

cool story...sooo...so hw do i get from being a human to a chicken. some trick!

and yeah, you cant judge a book by its cover (omfg i sound like my teachers) ozzy as a person, a drugged out lunitic, ozzy with the early 80s band. freakin insane. but also if you saw an interview while on tour with randy, randy was acctually causeing him to give up his drugs, and he said "im acctually heavily against drugs now" after randy died, he went back to drugs...well i would have also if the greatest musical mind tragically died, and it was parially my fault.

yea its a big tragic story that me and my friends have gotten into a millon times because one of our friends doesn't like Ozzy's music and we think he's an idiot...

But I agree with what you said about Bob Daisley and Randy Rhoads, both of them were and still are by today's standards great musicians

I just got put off the whole music genere when I came back to it. I don't know I just never felt anything from any form of rock songs after I listened to it ater I heard country. I mean for example, who'd you rather listen to if you had to pick? L7 or Rascall Flats? Well I took my pick for the country genre as I just preferred it and then was bored of anything else. I found what I really would like for life.

On the note of Ozzy being a jerk or being misjuged though, my sister read Sharon Osborne's autobiography and she was shocked at it through a stage and it must've ben the worst thing he's ever done, my sister pointed out a page to me that after they got married Ozzy forced her to have sex with him. She said it stopped after she lied and told him she had aids though, after that he got checked kept off her. But It's awful how a man could do that to his wife.

And the biggest issue, I AM A CHICKEN! Sure I am, it's only because in some of my photos...well, I had a bad day...that is what my breed looks like when it's been plucked and is given a tracksuit and hat...I'm not lieing! Step off! get off my case! Why would I lie!?!? I'm a chicken..no doubt...

So to your song have you thought of anything more ideas for it yet? i'll look forward to seeing.

forcing ppl to have sex goes along with being drugged up lol

don't take this the wrong way but everything i hear from you is mostly about randy Rhodes and a lot of early metal stuff. So how do you expect anything that you do not sound like early metal.

It's such a rough draft right now that it's hard to say what it sounds like considering there is not music with it right now.

It's a good start keep going...and if someone says it sounds like ozzy don't throw it a way...re-right it.

i wanted it to sound dark metal ozzyish, thats kinda what i was going at. i do have a kinda rock n roll song im working on but not lyrics have come to me for that.