Joined: 28 Aug 2008 United Kingdom Lessons: 24 Licks: 37 Karma: 47 Moderator
Cool stuff man, you've got good rhythm and nice choices in harmonic phrasings.
I think it has potential to tell a cool story, but it feels like it's the same all the way through.
Very crazy lyrics though haha!!
The distortion is pretty sloppy though and it sounds as though every instrument is essentially the exact same level, might wanna work on the mixing and mastering a little more.
Joined: 29 Apr 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Karma: 23
i thought if i left you kids alone ya might find some other humans to play w/ but damn (it aint just you and i dont know you) this sounds like over-thought/underplayed overly theorized play/paint-by-the-numbers pap ... I mean this in a constructive(as possible way)...
step away from the computer ... engage - create - evolve