The Storm (Lyrics) + Music and other **e

I know my personality is a little off centre, but here is some of the stuff ive been working on.

http://www.myspace.com/derekjohnevans

"The Storm" was recorded using a virtual fender amp, but one day I'll get a real one and do it right. Its basiclly a A Harmonic Minor scale progression.


"Something For Nothing" is a track I recorded two days ago after dealing with some ego driven musicians in Adelaide.

Hope you like both the music and words.

Cheers
Derek

Name: The Storm
Author: Derek John Evans

VERSE:
Am C F E
Am C Dm E

CHORUS:
Dm Dm/C Bdim+5 Am Am
G#dim F E E7
Dm Dm/C Bdim+5 Am Am
F E E

VERSE 1
I covert your heart as if it were gold
The lies I told, can never be sold
No one could tell you the price you had to pay
Take it all, take it with you. Here I will stay

CHORUS 1
And slowly I steer my boat out to sea
The storm makes no sound
The cold wind blows as the ocean takes me
All the way down

VERSE 2
You fight for love, for what it really means
I visit the broken souls and sexually obscene
I was born to deliver and to serve your desires
The cold dyeing embers ignite night fires

CHORUS 2
And slowly I steer my boat out to sea
The storm makes no sound
I hear them call as water washes over me
Set him free

VERSE 3

Your white skin of beauty lay over sand
Unforgiving rocks fit for the fallen man
I beg for mercy, from those I learnt to hate
Any hope of salvation, has been left to fate

CHORUS 3
And slowly I steer my boat out to sea
The storm makes no sound
The cold wind blows as the ocean takes me
All the way down
All the way down

Why isn't anyone comenting on this? Is it s h i t?
Please tell!!!!

http://www.myspace.com/derekjohnevans

Did I tune not right? if its crap ill give up!

TBH, I don't think anyone is going to comment on anything you post after your little pointless attack at EMB and Carl on the other topic dude...

You're pretty dissapointing as a member now...

O, god will the stupid just pass.

dissapointing? Again at 19, and 2066 posts, either your a unheard of genius, or just some git with a belief she has a opinion.

Awesome Man!!

This is your second warning...

No one likes a bad tempered member - espiceally one that takes his bad mood out on everyone else... grow up already or just leave this forum.

@JazzMaverick
Ive been playing yours:
http://www.myspace.com/miragegeneration

yea nice. I could die to this music.

I guess I didnt realy thnk I needed to kiss JazzMaverick ass to join this forum.

Anyone that wants to speak real music contact me.


Cheers
Derek John Evans

@Adelaidgutiar,
Ya don't have to kiss anyone's behind to join but a little respect for other members would be recommended.
We're a pretty close group here. In the last few days you've jumped on Carl and Jazzy (both good friends of mine)and two of the more experienced members here. There is no rule that you have to get along with everyone here but it just makes for a lot less needless tension. I'm not doing anything this morning, would you like to take a few shots at me too?
Steve

in b4 ban

Thanks Phip! He's been banned now - sooooo all is good with the forum again :)

is he banned for all eternity lol