"I'm just a Bird dog" - the lyrics

some lyrics i came up with today pretty much off the top of my head. I dont have my notepad on me atm so these might be a little different than I actually wrote

"I bring home girls like a dog bringing a bird to his masters feet
just hoping you'll be pleased with me.
But I just get scolded for leaving that dove on the floor,
I look at my feet as you point at the door.

I go out hunting and I keep losing my trail
Keep thinking I see tracks, but they're not really there.
I go home to daddy and he locks me in a cage,
and the I wait, I wait for another day.
But please show yourself some day,
please show yourself some day."

right now it has kinda a country feel to it. basically an A, D, A, E progression. i think i'll probably change it though. I'll probably write some more verses, but i might leave it short and sweet. depends on how long it is right now

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Yep,you need more verses bro! so far so good

"I keep going in circles, just chasing my tail
Trying to forget, but theres too many details,
your colorful feathers and your beautiful song.
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i need a last line, any suggestions?

"I like to wear my pink thong"? lol jk

Not sure man, depends really on your mood about the song.
I wrote(or actually am still writing) a song that has a very dark appeal throughout, but the ending isn't somehow, it changes the mood of the whole song and really affects the tone.

"I bring home girls like a dog bringing a bird to his masters feet
just hoping you'll be pleased with me.
But I just get scolded for leaving that dove on the floor,
I look at my feet as you point at the door.

I keep going in circles, just chasing my tail
Trying to forget, but there's too many details,
your colorful feathers and your beautiful song.
I have to catch you before you're gone

When night rolls around I bark at the moon
Don't know what you're gonna say, but I hope you reply soon
I've been looking for you, but I can't see through this fog
Why would you come, I'm just an old, lonely bird dog

I go out hunting and I keep losing my trail
Keep thinking I see tracks, but they're not really there.
I go home to daddy and he locks me in a cage,
where I sit and wait, I sit and wait for another day.

But please show yourself some day,
please show yourself some day.
please show yourself some day."

final i think, may make some tweeks, might be able to get a crappy recording of it done this weekend