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Botch_Up_And_Die

1 Jun 2009 14:36 | Quote

Joined: 01 Jun 2009
Ireland

Karma

Hopefully it comes out right haha..
Again just lookin for opinions, thinkin of usin it for a verse in a song, but is it to typical kinda? =/

Track 1




       PM PM PM PM PM   PM   PM   PM   PM   PM  

     S S  S  S  S  S  S S  S S  S S  S S  S S   

E||--------------------------------------------|

B||--------------------------------------------|

G||--3----------------4----3----1----3----4----|

D||--------------------------------------------|

A||----0--1--0--1--0----0----0----1----1----1--|

E||--------------------------------------------|









    PM PM PM PM PM   PM   PM   PM            

  S S  S  S  S  S  S S  S S  S S  S  S S  S  

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--3----------------4----3----1----3h-4-1h-3-|

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----0--1--0--1--0----0----0----1------------|

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    PM PM PM PM PM   PM   PM   PM   PM   PM  

  S S  S  S  S  S  S S  S S  S S  S S  S S   

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--1-----------------------------------------|

-------------------6----5----3----5----6----|

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----3--4--3--4--3----3----3----3----3----3--|





    PM PM PM PM PM   PM   PM            

  S S  S  S  S  S  S S  S S  S S E  E   

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---------------------------------3--3--|

--5----------------6----5----3---x--x--|

---------------------------------1--1--|

----3--4--3--4--3----3----3----3-------|

patleh		2 Jun 2009 16:36 \| Quote
Joined: 05 Dec 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 8	it sounded okay.

league		2 Jun 2009 18:00 \| Quote
Joined: way back United States Lessons: 2 Karma: 10	It sounded very dissonant I don't think it's typical. Sounds good.

JustJeff		3 Jun 2009 11:10 \| Quote
Joined: way back United States Lessons: 2 Karma: 21	You're using 3 redundant notes in the first few bars... so that gives it a very tense feel. Very loosely, you are playing a I, vi progression, with accidentals. If you wanted to know, I would say you are in Bb major, using 2 accidentals, a Ab and a B It's not bad... could try to venture off into a different section of the scale.

Botch_Up_And_Die		3 Jun 2009 14:31 \| Quote
Joined: 01 Jun 2009 Ireland Karma	Ah k sweet thanks everyone =] Yeah im thinkin of movin it around a bit more usin the same kinda pattern tho, and with th two guitars doin different stuff, just to make it sound a little busier..