old poem thing i wrote

When the battle is done, and all are dead but one,
Only then you can take prisoners,
and make him pick up all his fallen friends and sons.

Then lock him in a dungeon, starve him to death,
make him eat his very own flesh,
Only when he's gnawing on his bones,
You may hit him with stones.

When his skin starts to rot, and his spine in a knot
Then, and only then, may you send him back home
ride to his land 7 days later.... and do it again.

i was bored so i randomly decided to post this, which i wrote over a year ago when i was bored

Nice poem Bodom.
Perfect for a heavy metal song, eheh.

Sounds so true...

Nice dude, kinda heavy for me

I dont want to hijack your thread, but heres a poem I wrote cause making a new thread would be pointless

I stand here, you there
Long to embrace each others touch
When society draws us apart
We strive to be together

Haha, I love the juxtaposition of my love poem after your poem

good one, good rythm

this is like one of the first things ive ever written

lol, its quite br00tal like cannibal corpse or something lol

lol yeah, its too brutal for my taste even. thus im not gonna use it for a song lol

i enjoyed it. it all linked very well.