lets kick some lyrics out.

so, someone else put down some lyrics on here today, and i realized it had been a while since i just sat down and hammered something the fuck out. so here it goes.



when the sun is still at noon
and the day has forgot moon
don't forget the nighttime, girl
don't forget it's all too soon
and now the twilight fades away
and the night is here to stay
tell me that you love me girl,
then love me till the day.
and now the stars all shine like jewels
on both the lovers and the fools
kiss me once, but not again,
for love is truly cruel
and when the stars are gone
whether by death or by dawn
don't let go of my hand
don't tell me our love is done
when under love we remain slaves
and gently slip under the waves
don't let go of my hand, girl
love lies not still in the grave
our passion yet unmarred by time
or eternities soft silver chimes
don't forget, ever remember
undying love sealed in this rhyme


there is one idea out. lets switch gears...


see the star
shiver in fright
it'll turn your blood to ice tonight
lock the doors
and try to sleep
it'll take you where the nightmares creep
take you beyond the wall of sleep
blinking star
madness inside
every night your true self dies
red demon star
light years away
it'll make you scream, beg for the day
your body writhes, your mind decays
laughing tyrant
burn in the void
revels in what it has destroyed
mocking enslaver
crushing our dreams
with a hideous intention gleams
with no remorse drinks in our screams
the enemy
luminous fiend
visions at once grand and obscene
pursue now
the damned oppressor
burn through the high plains of ether
destroy the tyrant once and forever
vengeance
for our chains
a majestic celestial campaign
burn
away our fears
cosmic vengeance, shake the spheres
and silence is brought to the melody queer

and now i'm tired.

Uh... I tried and this is what I got:

Military spending out of control
A five hundred billion dollar toll
Men die starving on the street
Rich can’t be bothered to give aid

The poor get poorer and poorer
Whilst the wealthy get greedier
Our soldiers dying in the heat
Glorious leaders sleep in the shade


It's an A A B C D D B C Scheme

I'll burn your house and eat your flesh,
Tasty tasty barbeque cause i like it fresh
Rip out your bones and use em as toothpicks
while makin sure youre alive so ya still feel it

=D a couple minutes of thinking and u get a nice cannibal anthem

Heh, H.P. Lovecraft.

@ Baude: Both flow nice...good schemes. I like the verse ending in: jewels, fools, cruel. Thought that was one of the more origional lines in the poem and something to strive toward.

Another night blows by,
Lighted by headlights.
Your voice remains close-by,
As I let myself fall,
Into the bottom of the next bottle.

Can you see what I can see?
I heartless fiend through out the scene,
Taking hold off there minds,
Trying to conquer mans land.

@CTown: yeah, that was actually my favorite too. looking over them now... i'm not too pleased, especially with the second one. it's full of static, stops and turns, it doesn't drive well, not much substance. the first one i think is worth keeping and fixing. thanks for the input.

I reach out into the darkness
I cannot find your hand
Take me before I stumble and fall.
I need you forever,
more and more,
ever growing...
Tears flow from my swollen eyes,
Your nonexistence pounding on my face.
I wont let you let me fall,
I'm fully dependent.
You won't,
You can't.
Cause I'm fully dependent,
I'll see that you see me on till the end.

______

Falling, Into The Abyss,
Nothing Hurt More Than This,
Nothing... Nothing Like This.

Falling, Into Your Arms,
I Felt All The Pain Was Gone,
Now... Now That You're Gone.

Falling... Into Eternity,
Without You... Here Beside Me.

I got nothing right now but I have to say that Baudelaire is good with the ladies but he couldnt scare a fly LOL.

im good with the flies but i scare the ladies.
i can make girls my age cry by staring at them.. no joke i have >=)

LMAO. Same here(havent made a girl cry though)

I don't think Danzig included himself w/ the two good musicians

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I pulled this off of totse.com. One of them linked their convo about destroying this site. they want a war. ignore them.

lol, I knew he was a troll since the first day he showed up.

If they want a war, they can go to Iraq and help out there. Seriously, what do e-wars do? Prove who the bigger virgin is?

meh, what a bunch of ludistic amateurs. :P What happened to the good ol' days when totse guys knew how to hack and actually had a sense of humor. :(