Bwhahaha!! Another one 'Lyric thread'

I know, i'm just fishing for advice and thoughts from all you old (and young) lyrical sages on here...

Nutter, my friend, that was absolutely....

The...

Most...

Stup....ENDOUS

Song I have ever seen on here :D

Hehe just trying to scare you into think I was gonna say stupid :P
But I wouldn't cause that was fucking awesome man you have talent!

..Actually I was thinking 'attrosuious' okay i'm to tired and drunk to look it up, sorry.
Thanks for all the support guys, hearing such plesentrys has helped quite alot as I go through a tough time (alot of bad stuffs happened in the last 2-3 weeks =\)

LOL Oh yeah I know what that means but I like the song (:
Not atrocious.. awesome :D

And at least you are creative enough to write a song. I can't write lyrics very well ; /
Even though I am going through kinda a rough time too

imo your song kicks my songs ass, I've got like 4 songs all half written, this is the first song I've fully written I had that much shit to let out =\..ah well music,vocals and recording in the order hopefully haha.

Dude,
listen...
enjoy your drunk (stay at home), sleep it off and pick up on being a genius tomorrow. A time and place for everything, my friend.
And stop knocking yourself, there are plenty of people out there who are happy to do that for you. (screw 'em). If you don't believe in you who will?
PS. the bathroom is down the hall to the left......

Woooo to late phip, I relieved myself down the stairs *Points to big wet line going up the stairs* was aiming for the potted plant...

Yeah, will do boss (I havent slept in..4-5days..maybe 5mins kip but not sleep). I've never believed in myself, maybe its time I started! Hey who knows, maybe it'll get my a girl hahahahahah =D

No way dude my song fuckin' sucks cockles haha!
It needs so much editing and shit but yeah Ill get to that in like 3456324 years ;p

And as corny as it is, I believe in ya dude I believe you gots the talent to go out there and make something good of yourself!

Why can I just suddenly see like, phip turning round and going:
'The magic drink was nothing but water! It all came from within you Nutter!'
Meh, i'll have a looksey over it tomorrow maybe if you want :D Believe bro, believe in yourself.

Right I'm off before I start blabbing on like this is MSN. See you all in..7hours?

Haha nice ;p
Ya won't see me in 7. Ill be sleeping it will be 3 am here.
6 30 ish is when i go on the computer in the morning.
And if I can at school

Aha Yeah I am blabbing now too thanks NUTTER

Sleep well young Luke, err Nutter.

^ LOL

roflcopter

COPTER!!
LOLOL!

Apache gunship!!!

I ended up meditating not sleeping =|

I think you should try to add smoe music to the lyrics, cause the chances are higher to get it in the rythm you're looking for if you do it within a short time time after you'v written the lyrics (IMO). You probably won't like it first, but with some improvments after that, it should sound right.

I've got the chorus done already, just need to work on the breaks and alt.picking, verses and breakdowns, not so easy haha.

Some say they find it easier to write the rhythm first (guitar, etc.)
And others say it's easier to do the lyrics first.
I think it is easier to do the lyrics. But I am not too sure

I thibk it's easier to write the lyrics first, too. And while writing them, you can also think of a good rythm and music that could go with it, but different people, different ways of doin' the stuff.

Fer sure Mici.
I just did a new song and recorded it like an hour ago. I will post it shortly when I put it on a website :)