A Sneek Preview (check it?)

Hey this is just a thing i did, its mainly the progession that i want your opinion, the solo was just improve jam, but the jam track is part of a song im working on, it slowly builds to that point, that section starts slower... but heres the ending part i guess when it fades...

file:///Users/ellsdude8899/Desktop/0902101733.wav

Hope this works... Im trying to use soundclick but my mac wont let me put the .wav on the site.... Oh well... it was recorded by my phone btw... so the quality sucks

yeah it worked for me, just copy and paste in the adress bar

Oh and for you musical people, at the end when im doing the e7 chord with the g# and it ccuts out.... just imagine me resolving it... to an a... or an e.... or i think the minor third woulda sounded cool but you know... feedback apprieciated :)

it worked because it's on your computer dude, not going to work for anyone else.

try to post it to soundclick or 4shared.com then share that link.

Oh hah, yeah i tryed soundclick but it wont let me upload it... ill try again

hmmmm hopefully it works man, I really want to hear this progression you got going on :D

thanks hah yeah when i try to upload it its grey as opposed to files which are black, and i cant move it to the song thing...

Edit:

GOT IT! woot

tell me what u think before i go to school! :)

If your curious to hear the build up progression (the progression of the first part that leads into this part which is the end...) then if enough like it i will, or if u wanna hear the song same deal i guess...

http://www.4shared.com/audio/u563Pq3e/0902101733.html

Dude! so sorry about not getting to you earlier :( I started to watch Beavis and Butthead do America(it's amazingly funny haha)

After listening to it man I definitely like the feel and mood the progression creates. It's very different from most progressions but it isn't too far out there to be confusing to a listener ;)

Good job, and the solo was very fitting I might add.

Get yourself set up to start working on a song based around that progression man!

Case

I acctually have the song completely finished around it but sadly havent recorded it with my bassist and drummer, so i only can show u the guitar parts...

Bump?

Give it a listen, if you dont like it tell me! i dont care i just want honest feedback