Zombie_Fish |
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Joined: 22 May 2010 United States Karma
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cnnYF_hEYAA |
EMB5490 |
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Joined: 10 Feb 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Licks: 1 Karma: 31
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how long have you been playing for?
your timing is a bit off in some spot...
you look very flat fingered when you bend... try to bend with more bend in your fingers... also work on your vibrato... its very shakey try to get a definition in it uk... i feel like vibrato is a natural thing you get though
its very techincally accurate and your tone is pretty good too uk |
BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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just to clarify, when you say "uk" you mean "you know" right? or maybe not
i'll listen when i get some time |
EMB5490 |
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Joined: 10 Feb 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Licks: 1 Karma: 31
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yeah uk is you know sorry bout that |
Zombie_Fish |
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Joined: 22 May 2010 United States Karma
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i was nervous as hell lol so imight have messed up a lot plus my low E sting went out of tune which was really bad. and im not the best singer im still working at that :) ive been playing for a bout 4.7 years now |
BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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i liked it man, vocals were good. if there was one bad thing i could say is that some of the licks were a bit choppy, im not really sure how you would fix that. but other than that it was really good |
Zombie_Fish |
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Joined: 22 May 2010 United States Karma
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thanks man it really does mean a lot. I take criticism respectivly. :) |
Schecter_player |
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Joined: 12 Jul 2009 Canada Karma: 3
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Yeah, agreed with everyone above, I really liked your tone.
Just about the singing, you did a really good job, but...
I think you could have done a much better job if you could do the song in a lower key. It seemed like you were struggling to get some of the higher notes. I dunno if that helps you any, but i know that i have to sing everything pretty much an octave lower. :P |
Empirism |
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Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Finland Lessons: 4 Karma: 35
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Not bad at all, It was pretty cool performance all around. Few mistakes mayb and few problems, but hey.. thats life, there are good gigs and bad gigs :D... cannot change the fact.
Only thing which botherd me (a very little) was "doublestops" at the end of solo parts. they was mayb little off the beat. Tone was cool, singing was ok and what was best thing, is that even if you was nervous, it didnt look that way and performing was selfconfident.
Cheers!
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