Another weak song-

gshredder2112		24 Jun 2011 16:04 \| Quote
Joined: 03 Sep 2010 United States Licks: 3 Karma: 22	The hope that was Were did you go tonight,? How did you get home from there? Did you find your answers,even though you know there not there. I been waiting all night,to hear were you been,even though i know your nights been all full of sin. what does it cost? what do i have too pay? To keep my woman faithful,so home she will stay., my life is like a snake,I cant get a grip,I try to be good,in hope the scales will tip.But it aint gonna happen,she aint gonna stay,so id better get goin,before i fade away \M/(*-+) gs2112

gshredder2112		26 Jun 2011 11:58 \| Quote
Joined: 03 Sep 2010 United States Licks: 3 Karma: 22	bump?

tinyskateboard		26 Jun 2011 12:36 \| Quote
Joined: 28 Apr 2010 United States Karma: 11	I like this one even better than the last. I think you will be a great songwriter. It's sorta ironic I should be the one to like your lyrics... I might examine reworking this line (keep my woman faithful,so home she will stay)

gshredder2112		26 Jun 2011 13:02 \| Quote
Joined: 03 Sep 2010 United States Licks: 3 Karma: 22	how is it ironic?lol and thanks.