Oh this hurricane - song I wrote

baseballer02		13 Jan 2010 19:21 \| Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009 United States Karma: 2	Oh, Where is the eye, To this storm, Hurled at us like, A thousand lightning bolts? Oh, Under this war torn sky, I see a refugee, I see a thousand lives, Begging on their knees! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane, Much more than I can take. Soon I will break. Oh oh this hurricane! Oh, broken and scarred, here come the empty men, Who've lived a thousand lives, And not seen one day! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane, Much more than I can take. Soon I will break. Oh oh this hurricane! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane, Much more than I can take. Soon I will break. Oh oh this hurricane! Oh, the sun hides behind Another dying sky, With a thousand clouds, that blot out our dreams! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane, Much more than I can take. Soon I will break. Oh oh this hurricane! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane, Much more than I can take. Soon I will break. Oh oh this hurricane! Oh, Oh Oh this hurricane (X8) Any suggestions/comments/ criticism?

Musical_Magic		13 Jan 2010 21:04 \| Quote
Joined: 29 May 2008 United States Karma	Looks good, Im not skilled at this kinda stuff so hopefuly someone else can give you a pointer, What kinda of music is it? Metal? Rock? Jazz?

baseballer02		14 Jan 2010 20:00 \| Quote
Joined: 27 Dec 2009 United States Karma: 2	Its rock-ish.... its very switchfoot sounding for a comparison

carlsnow		15 Jan 2010 16:02 \| Quote
Joined: 29 Apr 2009 United States Lessons: 2 Karma: 23	baseballer02 says: here come the empty men, Who've lived a thousand lives, And not seen one day Nice line!! RAWK! Cs