Song I wrote

Tell me what you think. The song's called American Ghost Town.

Shallow Hearts,
Empty Minds.
Shell of Me,
Shell of We.

No Eyes,
No light.
Blind is me,
Blind are we.

I rise and I fall,
My world is upside down.
Time to turn it around.

Cuz I'm coming alive in this American ghost town.
Yeah I'm coming alive in this American ghost town.
This is my brand new start,
I am coming alive tonight!

City Walls,
City Falls.
Do you see,
What we need to be?

We rise and we fall,
The world is upside down.
Time we turn it around.

Cuz We're Coming alive in this American ghost town.
Yeah We're Coming alive in this American ghost town.
This is a brand new start,
We are coming alive tonight!
yeah we're coming alive tonight!

This town is not real,
But its real enough.
This town is not a fake,
Yet its all made up.

Tonight!

Cuz We're Coming alive in this American ghost town.
Yeah We're Coming alive in this American ghost town.
This is a brand new start,
We are coming alive tonight!

Cuz We're Coming alive in this American ghost town.
Yeah, this American ghost town.
This is a brand new start,
We are coming alive tonight!
Alive tonight!

In case anybody was wondering, the style of this song (and much of my writing) is very Switchfoot-ish, to give you a comparison.

I like it, it sets a good mood and everything works well together. Definitely keep it up man, I'd love to hear the final verson (with music).

Thanks! I have music written to it but the only problem is I can't sing, and I have a crappy mic to record it with.