Skold |
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Joined: 14 Mar 2008 United States Karma: 3
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http://www.myspace.com/americanbrits
"Then He Smiles".
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joe |
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Joined: 20 Aug 2007 United Kingdom Karma: 1
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i like it. very well produced, chorus is better than the verse in my opinion.
verse reminds me of up in the sky by oasis a bit but its still very good.
EDIT: not toooo sure on the vocal harmony at the end but its your song at the end of the day |
Skold |
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Joined: 14 Mar 2008 United States Karma: 3
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Yeah, I don't really like the vocal harmony on the outro at all. I thought it was good at first, and after I finished saving everything and uploading the song, I was like, "I hate that". |
foogered |
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Joined: 30 Apr 2008 United States Lessons: 2 Licks: 11 Karma: 9
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The verse gets a little monotonous. I'd suggest adding some more chord changes, so that the verse supports the chorus. |
Empirism |
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Joined: 23 Jun 2008 Finland Lessons: 4 Karma: 35
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Sound very good, your voice is nearly hypnotic on that piece. Well I dont know, I didnt found any bad thing about chorus in the end. Song itself is great...again.
I agree that its a bit monotonic, but that is almost good thing, cuz that style is so hypnotic. |
Skold |
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Joined: 14 Mar 2008 United States Karma: 3
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Thanks, man. |
Phip |
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Joined: 23 Dec 2007 United States Lessons: 1 Karma: 45 Moderator
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Skold,
Well I have to say your vocals are getting better as time goes on, which shows you've been working hard at it. good job |
Kukuruyuk |
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Joined: 21 Jul 2008 Indonesia Karma
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I think it need few variations. its too long to hear same chord repeated |
CTown |
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Joined: 14 Jul 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 1
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I like the chorus, but that's a good call on the monotone verses. But it was good enough to listen all the way through and to some of your other samples. Gotta say, I think you are on to something with "Sunshine in Hell" |
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