New song

http://media.putfile.com/The-American-Brits---Its-Just-The-Way-It-Is

Feedback?

I think it needs more work.

as for the recording it defiantly needs a better re-done, i had to turn my speaker way up to hear anything. the intro was way too long. I just makes it hard to get into.

as for the song it's self i would try a little quicker tempo but the chords and melody were right on. were you singing? i'm not sure but the voice may have been trying to hard to go deep, but practice will help with that.

I really liked the song it just needs work. don't take this as a bad comment, remember Bob Dylans song Like a Rolling Stone was originaly a Waltz. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Like_a_Rolling_Stone). keep plugging away at it and it will come.

Thanks for the advice, mate.

I wasn't really into the vocals, either. Especially seeing as I messed up the EQ on 'em.

Well all right skold, that was an original song of yours wasn't it?
Really can't fault your playing, liked the way you wrapped it up.

Yeah, I posted the verse's of it yesterday.