I messed up at the second chorus, meant to play a C#5 but I played B5 instead. Oh well it isn't that noticeable. Almost sounds like it was supposed to be in there.
Also,
The frekain' webcam mic started gettin all whacked out and got like fuzzy and stuff, I don't know why. But anyways. here it is. Again, looking for HONEST feedback, so gimme what ya got!
Just a sec, I don't think it worked... I will code this in a sec.
Joined: 10 Feb 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Licks: 1 Karma: 31
its good, the intro is off, but then clicks in, how long have u been playing. kinda repeditive. u do one thing for a while, then another, then another, never really go back to what u were doing. at like 220 it sounds like mettalica b4 the solo in one.
So maybe if I do the intro less times, (I play it about 5 or 6) maybe like, play it 3 times? And then the part before the first chorus twice? i think the chorus is fine. The 2nd verse I still am not sure about yet. I am thinking about shortening it a lot and just have a more fast riff. I hear what yah mean about the metallica thing, it does sound like that riff.
I was only playing for 2 years so yeah, not that great.
Joined: 10 Feb 2008 United States Lessons: 1 Licks: 1 Karma: 31
make some lyrics, grab a sick solo outta the book of heavy distorted solos, and ur on ur way. definatly need a hearable solo, if ther was one, i couldnt reconize it. just kinda sounded like a little riff or somthing, not saying its bad, just expand on it.
It's just a riff actually. It's just some speed picking then a more faster catchy one then some weird 1-2-3 thing. I will work on it more, infact right now cause I ain't got nothin' else to do.
