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Some new lyrics for your head.

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Skold  
25 Jun 2008 21:23 | Quote
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Blinded by my shades, I can't see you.
Shiny glassy tops, and the sunny rays seem to fade.
Sunny shines on everyone, but it seems to forget my very face.
Let the sunshine in, and it takes me away from a folsom place.

I wanna live in the sunshine.
Fillin' up on the Boone's wine.
I wonder if it'll be my day...to go to hell.

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It's kinda bluesy.

I don't have a name for it. But if you guys can think of anything, just shoot.


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Skold  
26 Jun 2008 00:38 | Quote
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Alright, I've recorded a shit version of it: http://media.putfile.com/The-American-Brits---Sunshine-In-Hell

I've also decided to call it "Sunshine In Hell".

I really fucked up the second verse.


Note: I will be writing a second verse instead of repeating the first.
Veqq  
26 Jun 2008 05:20 | Quote
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No idea name wise. I must say though, your getting into the blues allot lately...
Skold  
30 Jun 2008 17:23 | Quote
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http://media.putfile.com/The-American-Brits---Sunshine-In-Hell-70

New version. Not so shitty.
telecrater  
30 Jun 2008 18:10 | Quote
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I really liked that tune and I think off all the songs I've herd you come up with that is my favorite.


As for names I think "sunshine is hell" works well but maybe "my day in hell"

Good job
Skold  
30 Jun 2008 19:36 | Quote
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Thanks, man.

I think it's one of my favorite songs so far.


Also, you Johnny Cash fans should note the Folsom Prison Blues reference.
Skold  
1 Jul 2008 16:15 | Quote
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Anyone else care to share their thoughts?


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