Hears a short tune

Hey check out this short tune I wrote a little while back http://www.soundclick.com/members/default.cfm?member=Notim Then click on the artist page Heavy Laden thats what I called the band.

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lol mature listeners only? 18+ lol wtf notim what did i tell u bout puttin porn on ur website lol. o mrs.notim? lol im jk it no work, post it on youtube or somthing or forward the link here

LMAO sry guys I didnt know, this link will work........http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/HeavyLaidin

at about 1:18, i feel is an appriopiate time for lyrics to come in, when it goes down low. thts really a gr8 tune, thts the classic rock sound. its like blues with heavy metal, one word: BEA-UTIFUL

tab it and put in lick folder?

kinda sound lynyrd skynyrdish at ennd and pink floydish at beginning cause they go from high to low and like break then continue, take away the ba da dup pa u no going up the string like muting it at around 44 secs, and at 24 or so secs and put it at end and it could the intro to a absolutely fantastic song.

It does have some potential.

well done. i did feel the lead needed to start to build up to a
higher key around 35 secs and then back down around 1:00,but overall
i really liked it.

there was alot of feeling in that song and people just don't play like
that anymore.

kinda hard to make out whats going on in middle it sounds somthing like ur muting the notes going up the frets but i cant tell

Hey tys everyone!EMB the run in the middle is very very wierd I do mute some strings slightly because their kinda open runs that go down and quickly back up then quickly back down again its really hard to explain.

heres the beggining and end parts tabbed as well as i could

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b--------------------8-8-6-5-6-5-6------------------

g--7bfr(hold)-5h7p5-7--------------7-5h7p5----------

d------------------------------------------7v-5---5-7v

a-----------------------------------------------7----

e-----------------------------------------------------

the end about 1:03

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b------------------------------------------------------------------8-8-8-6-5-6-5-8-8-6-5-6-5--

g--5-4-5-7-5-4-5-7-(and reapte till)-7bf(hold)-7-7bfr-5v-----7bfr-5---------------------------

d-------------------------------------------------------7-5v---------------------------------7-5v

a---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

e---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

starts to fade out after

notims version is this

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b--------------------------------------------------------8-8-8-6-5-6-5-8-5h8p5---------

g--5-4-5-7-5-4-5-7(3 times)-7(HOld)-7bf-7-5----7bf-5h7p5-----------------------7-5h7p5-----

d-------------------------------------------7-5----------------------------------------7-5-

a--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

e--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

his vesion is somthing like tht i cant make it out.
im working on middle

I feel Honored.

very nice EMB...think you could tab some of my solo's (just kidding!) hehe...i improvise most of my solo's so playing them twice is kinda hard.

lol not bad for som 1 whos been playing 4 3 months. i got gr8 musical ear from my dad(concert pianist). im off on some parts, and the beginning i made some minor changes but i think its good.

aha and finally the middle of notims song not very good, im tabbing with a cold and i didnt spend much time on it, feel free to critisize or change

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b--5-8-6p5-6-5-8-6p5-6-5-8-6p5-6-5-8bf-6h8p6-5-6-8-8bf-6h8p6-5-6-5-6-5-----------------

g--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

d--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

a--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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this wont be right, but its close and its what i can make out, its at about 35 36 secs when he starts trilling

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b---5h6p5h6p5 do tht a couple times until---------------------------------------8

g--7--------------------------------------palm mute some notes up to this-7-7bf---7-5

d-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------7

a-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

e------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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b----------------------------------------6-5-6-8-5h6p5---thn stuff tht i cant make out

g--thers stuff in between this-5h7p5-7-5-----------------

d-----------------------------7--------------------------

a-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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id try trilling on seval of these nots:
b--5h6p5-6-8 and reapete do slow and fast to mix with tempo then the end comes at 102 or 1:03

well from what I remember of the lead I play some open Kinda runs from B all the way do to the A ( the wierd part) but I dont tab or anything so I really can't tell ya,and I do some quick stuff in between some of the slow stuff to change the tempo a bit and EMB this is the very first time anyone has ever tabed or I have ever seen any of my music on paper!!!!! Thanks EMB I am honored.

its not everything, the runs from b to a i could figure out, i got some of the quick parts inbetween, and most of the main sounds, i think its pretty good, may be a couple to many tempo changes but its pretty good. as i said b4 i got nothing else to do besides being sick so it was my pleasure

I tried to give it a listen Notim but couldn't get it to play, I'm sure it rocks! I had the same problem on GS site.

That's one sweet tune, man. Mind if I write some lyrics for it?

hey! i was doing tht. lol im not very good at it.

Go for it dude!This tune was just a thought I had at the time (tune in the head)so i recorded it but really for know one to hear I'm really glad people like it. Do what ever you like with it....its just a thought.(long story....lol)

Here you go,


"If I said that I were never goin' home, would you care?
If I said that I'd be leavin' sunday, would you just stare?
I've gotta know just how you feel right now, so I can decide.
Because I'd hate to know that I added to the tears you've cried?


Tell me now, cause I've gotta know where I'm gonna go.
My path's in your hands, and you know that I would follow you through the lands.
I've gotta make a choice on where I'm gonna rome.
If we don't decide, we'll never know that am never goin' home."


That's all I got right now.

I like it ,your on the right track.

Thanks! Once I'm done with them, you can have them.

u gotta put it on tape and record it and send it here lol ill put me playing the song on the guitar. its kinda bluesish. ill have more time to think when i go skiing this weekend.

As soon as I figure out the chord, I'll record.

the track back was is C# and I was in allmost a half step down if I remember right.Hope that helps.

It does, but I'll probably just do a track over-lay kind of thing.