Some feedback

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=vaIdyzao_xQ

Hey guys, I was just wondering if you could come check out my video and maybe give some feedback on what you thought of my singing and what I can improve on, etc. I can't get the video up because I'm only on my iPhone, the video was taken on my iPhone too so it's not the greatest quality, but I sure do love This thing haha :p Check it out

There haha got my computer back and embed it for you guys