Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Okay, well, I DEFINITELY copied GuitarSlinger on the site, but, whatever.
The song that's up right now is just one I wrote for a girl who asked for a song, and actually took the time to fight with another girl over who got the song written about them lol. But, there will be more. As I write this, it's about 3 AM, the 10th of June. I would have recorded more tonight, but people are sleeping.
Anyway, don't judge too harshly on the current one lol. It's very tongue-in-cheek. So, as you've probably figured out if you read all this, I'm just making a post with no significance for fun and out of complete boredom, but I shall, and WILL post more soon.
You deserve a reward if you read that,
Ozz
Oh yeah, the link. xD
http://www.showcaseyourmusic.com/capnjake |
Guitarslinger124 |
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Joined: 25 Jul 2007 United States Lessons: 12 Licks: 42 Karma: 38 Moderator
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First thing that came to my mind was, you definitely gotta sing man! Don't be whispering into that microphone. You got a pretty good voice, don't be afraid to use it.
Thought the lyrics were kinda funny. Guitar was solid too. Showcase is a great site man, I've met so many great musicians on that site. Don't hesitate to look around dude.
Rock on! |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Haha, as for the vocals, ya know how I said I was posting this at 3? Well, the song was recorded at 2 haha. Plus my dad is almost always sleeping so I tried not to be too loud.
And thanks dude. I saw your stuff and thought it was pretty legit (the site AND the music) so I decided to put my stuff up there. |
JazzMaverick |
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Joined: 28 Aug 2008 United Kingdom Lessons: 24 Licks: 37 Karma: 47 Moderator
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I honestly mean no offense here, but you're just making excuses about your vocals dude.
If you know what the problem is, why record it? Why not wait until it's day time when you can record and sing properly?
Just something to think about.
Your lyrics are funny though and I like the tone of your guitar, you've got talent dude - just need to be bold and use that talent!
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soy.el.che |
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Joined: way back Mexico Lessons: 1 Karma: 9
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post the lyrics. i did liked it, the relaxed style |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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@ Jazz - lol. Shhhh. I know, I know. I just wanted to do it then and there because I had kept trying to think of lyrics, and those just came to me really fast, and if I waited to record it, it wouldn't have the same feeling to it. Plus I didn't really want to use my constipated biker voice for a song like that lol.
@ Soy - Here ya go dude, and other dude/dudets who didn't know what I was saying.
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Liz
I'm nervous as hell
As you can tell
Tried to write this for days
But my head was a haze
But not from weed
Because weed is bad
Unless you're using it for medical purposes
Anyway, I'm singing this song for you today
Because I'm not some douche who never does the **** that he say,said, says.....whatever.
Liz
I am nervous as hell today
tried to write you another song but it was too **
And I don't mean ** in a mean way
Because if your ** then that might offend you
And if so I'm sorry, I'm sorry, And I don't have another line to insert here for the next chord
(NEXT VERSE xD)
LIZ!
I am nervous as hell today
I'm trying to sing this song I say
But I can't sing, so don't criticize me or commit suicide
Heyyyyyyyyyyyy Liz!
I am nervous as hell today
And especially right now
Because I ran out of stuff to say
But it's still a song I say
A bad one but a song anyway
And you're gonna have to live with because I can't write mooshy songs
Liz this next verse, I'm just gonna say liz
Hey liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeIIIIIIIIuuuuuuuuuuuuuuoooooooOOOOOOOO
And Liz
I'm nervous as hell
and Liz
Don't....tell?
*Hendrix riff!* |
BodomBeachTerror |
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Joined: 27 May 2008 Canada Lessons: 2 Licks: 1 Karma: 25
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haha i liked it. it was very enjoyable |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Thanks man. (:
Thanks everyone for that matter.
Cheers |
coleman |
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Joined: 10 May 2009 United States Karma: 8
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yeah me too it was tight! |
DarkRiff |
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Joined: 18 Mar 2008 United States Licks: 2 Karma: 12
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you have an excellent voice that goes very well with acoustic guitar.
but as Jazz said, record during the day, so you can sing LOUDER.
Words to live by:
Think and Write during the Night, Record and Play during the Day. |
Mistaluke |
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Joined: 23 Mar 2010 Karma: 11
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Lol this song made me laugh in a good way
best parts
But I can't sing, so don't criticize me or commit suicide
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tried to write you another song but it was too ****
And I don't mean **** in a mean way
Because if your **** then that might offend you |
Ozzfan486 |
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Joined: 01 Oct 2008 United States Licks: 1 Karma: 18
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Hahaha! Thanks guys. (:
And I'll keep that in mind Darkriff. I think I of all people need to. :P |
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