Once Again!

I put this under band promotion for fun lol. I've put up some new songs since my last post. Ignore the little piano/keyboard song. It was quickly thrown together and sloppy.

Ozz

Here she blows! - http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=414224994

Not gonna lie, Nasty sounds like a bunch of noise to me... but I do have a very old man-style ear for music :/

There is some kind of fade going on from left to right and right to left on Clean song that is driving me insane on my headphones. I don't know if you'll hear it with speakers, but you definitely get it with headphones.

Dying in Reverse has a great sound. It left me wanted a melody and something to listen to. Maybe use this to lead into some progression/melody, i think it would sound absolutely fantastic!

Bump up the volume a bit on your guitar. It's a little soft. Other than that, great work.

Not trying to be mean, but none of those are really songs. I would use them as intros, maybe.

The sound is awful, but I assume you to be recording with a computer mic or something. If I were you, I would get a small mixer and send a line into the computer.

Thanks guys! [?]

Anyway, yeah, none of them were meant to be songs. Just screwing around. And I know, the sound is terrible. But theres no way I'm recording line-in. Sounds like utter ** to me. And yes, that means WORSE than how I do it. But that's just me. If I ever get anything for better quality it'd a good mic. Oh, and Jeff, that fade is the wah pedal. Sorry for the annoyance. Think of it as added psychedelia! lol.

One thing I have to say about guys on this site is that they take criticism very well. I'll take a listen to this stuff later when I'm not at work. I need to post some of my stuff and see what you guys think.

You've got speed. I wish I could hear it a little better. For only playing for a year or so I think you are pretty good. If you keep at you'll be great!

Ozzy,
haha first to start....Plungertown? c'mon you are kidding right? Is that where they invented the plunger? I'm cracking up here and couldn't resist. ok, on with the comments.
Listening to "Random **ness" right now. It doesn't suck! "one thumb up" on that one.
"Clean song". Reminded me of a Beatles acid trip! So yeah, thanks man!
"dying in reverse". you do like the effects don't you? very trippy. what did it sound like in "forward"? not much to say on this one because you are obviously screwing around with effects, but i didn't hate it.
"me on guitar". Yikes, whale songs! got all kinds of crackling and stuff on this one. great speed, but where ya going with this? Ok, how about getting down to serious business and playing us a cover or an original "jake tune" eh? c'mon you can do it!
Phipster

lol. The plungers are our Football team's "Encouragement Icon" or something. They gave 'em away! Weird as dump really lol. Okay, the reversed on was just a part of "Clean Song" that I reversed and added some effects to. The one about "Me on Guitar" or whatever was just quickly and sloppily thrown together because my friend played piano on it and I wanted to post it. So, what DO you guys want to hear? lol. I'm lost here.

Ozz

Oh, and FenderBender, thanks dude! Killer SC too! haha.

Cool, I liked the soundscenes on couple songs. Clean song was favorite, though it would be cool when you get these recorded by proper way. Your playing is on good way, you did your homeworks m8.. Pretty fast, not much timing issues or atleast i couldnt hear... Nice, keep up the good work and get yourself a recording stuff XD...

Cheers
Empirism

Thanks Emp! I really appreciate all the feedback guys.